What should I call my novel? (See Details?!)?
Well, thanks to some Yahoo! Answers answerer’s, I have finally come up with a plot for my novel that I am going to re write.
It is sort of a forbidden love triangle thingy. Lol ha ha!!!! Yes, you’ll probably think it is incest but, it is NOT. At all. Ok so the plot is here.
Veronica Tsuite is a 17 year old girl, who is the shy yet brave girl in her grade. She is – or was, 100 % virgin before her Mom got married. Her new step Dad is a rich and somewhat famous horoscope writer for the daily paper, yet he writes ridiculous and funny lies, and he is extremely awkward and nerdy, although surprisingly, he looks nice and has a great personality besides that. She starts crying on there wedding day at there reception, since they have to leave there so small town that she loves and is popular in (within her group of friends and stuff). So anyway, when she is crying up in the hotel room (that she shares with Brant, one of her new step brothers), Brant tries to console her, and they end up kissing, and then having sex. Veronica doesn’t find him appealing though, and feels so weird about it all. So, she decides to let it go and ignore it. The story then starts (the first part would probably, most likely, be a part of the prolouge). So it starts when….two months go by and they barely speak, make physical or emotional contact, not even saying good morning and good night, that’s how bad it was. Veronica has a boyfriend in her new town and made friends quickly. She never mentions to anyone that she had sex with Brant. She actually barely remembers it unless ’sex’ is brought up. I mean, how could she forget her first time, right? Anyway. She starts feeling sick, and her Mom takes her to the doctor. They are about to do blood tests on her, and they ask if she has been sexually active. She then recalls that night, but, lies and says no. When she sees the needle, she pretends to be freaked out and she quickly runs away to throw up in the bathroom. She takes a taxi to the drug store and buys a pregnancy test. She takes the test and it says she is pregnant. There is a whole love triangle thing and complications and her parents throw her out, and Brant, being a trouper, decides to come with her to a hotel at least for a couple months, and they both have to get jobs and decide what they are doing, etc. so yeah lol.
Does it sound too boring?
Is it interesting or no?
Any suggestions?
What should I call my novel?
stepping up
you should call it
Step-Brother
wow that is awesome!! totally interesting!! i would read it!!!!
i don’t know what you should call it..maybe something about a love triangle, or like a total mistake…i don’t know hope that helps.
50% lover 50% brother
my half love
a good title would b something involving family being forced upon u
OMFG.u better make this novel. it sounds AHH-MAZING. i totally wnna read it. it sounds really good.
call it like:family affairs
that isnt too good of a name but u still have 2 make this novel
This is the most poorly written shit stain piece of writing I’ve ever read…Cunt Stain 8====================>~~~~~~~( . Y. )
Hmm..
Veronica
Veronica’s Love
Loving Veronica
It sounds interesting to me!
Can’t wait to read it, oh, and please when you are done writing it, send it to me via email or I’ll give you my address.
Onisan (japanese for brother)
It really depends on where you are going with this? There needs to be an additional twist or plot. Is there a murder, did it really turn out to be a rape, who is the antagonist in this? A title based just off of a girl getting pregnant from a one night stand and being interested in another guy is a bit too vague to be able to do. Interesting twist with the whole step family thing but you need something else. Also, when talking about other people it is “their” not “there”. Keep working on it, it sounds like you have a good imagination just develop it further. I would suggest reading some random books that have love triangles in them or murder mysteries. Find an author that speaks to you and see how they develop their plots and the twists and turns. Good luck to ya.
It sounds great! I, too am a writer and will be writing a book. But I don’t know what about yet. lol. So looks like your way ahead of the game than me. You go girl! lol. As for the title, your the only one who can come up with that since it’s your story. I would recommend just to start writing the novel. Even if it’s all done and you don’t have a title one day it will just come to you. Make sure its something catchy but not too revealing. Something that will spark interest and remotely tell what the story is about. Or it could be something completely random that works sometimes too. Often writers like to tie in something crucial to the story (like the climax or last page of the book) into the title. Good luck and congrats!! This also sounds like something that could be turned into a movie. You ever thought about writing screenplays before?
Don’t worry about the title until you finish the story..
What in the world is “100% virgin”? You either are one or not.
Your writing style is rather juvenile and leaves much to be desired. Just write for your own enjoyment and to hone up your writing skills.
The Related Lover or My Related Lover
Hmm, sounds good! would love to red it.
Here’s what i came up with:
A Foolish Reaction
Life as a new it
Double bets of Love
I’ll post more when i can think of it…
You should include something about tests in the title. It alludes to the pregnancy test, the test of motherhood, testing family trust, etc.
This Is Only A Test
or
Tried and Tested
or
The Many Tests of Veronica Tsuite
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